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在今年三月的奧斯卡頒獎典禮中, 一位頒獎嘉賓開了一位 明星老婆的玩笑, 惹怒了該明星, 該明星直接上臺揍了他一拳。 請以此新聞為題, 寫一篇文長至少 120 個單詞( words) 的英 文作文。 文分兩段, 第一段說明自己對這位明星行為的看法; 第二段請說明若遇到自己的朋友被冒犯, 你會如何應對。
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利用 2W + 1H (What + Who + How) | |
何事 | What action might you take if confronted with any form of abuse ? |
何人 | Who around you has ever experienced mental / verbal / physical abuse ? |
如何 | How would you respond to these abuses or help others overcome them ? |
大綱
第一段: 我反對使用暴力來應對言語虐待。
• 生理跟言語的傷害都會在受害者的心中留下 永久的傷疤。
• 在全球現場直播時,攻擊他人是無法讓人容 忍的事情。
第二段: 如果我的朋友受到侮辱,我肯定會立即採取 行動。
• 我會告訴施暴者停止他們的行為並嘗試站在 受害者的角度思考。
• 我會要求施暴者真誠地向受害者道歉,然後 我會提供受害者情緒上的支持。
• 如果事情失控,我會向老師尋求幫助
第一段: I oppose using violence in response to verbal abuse.
a. Both physical and verbal abuse leave permanent emotional scars in the victims.
b. Attacking someone during a live, worldwide TV broadcast is extremely inappropriate.
第二段: If my friends were insulted at school, I would take immediate action.
a. I would tell the offenders to stop their behavior and put themselves in the victim’s shoes.
b. I would demand that the offenders sincerely apologize to the victims and offer the victims my emotional support.
c. If things were beyond my control, I would turn to the teacher for help.
結論句: No one should have to tolerate insults from others.
範文
The incident of a movie star slapping a presenter at an awards show for telling a bad joke about his wife has caused a fierce debate. Some claim that the presenter deserved the slap because his joke was offensive. I, however, oppose using violence to respond to verbal abuse since any form of abuse would leave a deep emotional scar in the victim. Moreover, any act of aggression against someone during a live, worldwide TV broadcast is extremely inappropriate.
If my friends were insulted, I would definitely take immediate action. First of all, I would tell the offenders to stop their behavior and try to put themselves in the victim’s shoes. In addition, I would demand that the offenders sincerely apologize to the victims. Then I would offer the victims my emotional support. If things spun out of control, I would turn to the teacher for help. After all, what it all comes down to is the lack of mutual respect. No one should have to tolerate insults from others.
I asked Katie a math question and she responded to it quickly.
我問凱蒂一個數學問題,她很快便回答我。
The patient responded well to the new medicine.
病人對新藥的反應良好。
Let ’s take action before it is too late.
我們採取行動以免太遲。
Try to put yourself in Andy's shoes since he is also struggling to make that decision.
試著站在安迪的角度想,因為他也很掙扎要不要做那個決定。
Things just spun out of control after the workers went on strike.
在工人開始罷工之後,事情就一發不可收拾。
After learning about the conflict between Nina's mom and her, what it all comes down to is their lack of communication.
在得知妮娜與其母親之間的紛爭後,歸根結底就是她們缺乏溝通。