我的手機哪兒去了? Left on the Train

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Nina 因為提前二十分鐘抵達車站，所以她決定玩一些遊戲來打 發時間 → 旅途中 Nina 在火車上睡著了 → 當 Nina 準備要出站 時，到處都找不到她的手機。

故事結局是 Nina 找站長求助，站長打電話給列車長後，他告訴 Nina 有位乘客已把手機交給列車長，將會安排下一班列車送回 臺中站。

 動動腦 

故事設定	主題	Left on the train
	時地	On a Saturday morning, at Taichung Station
	人物	Nina, the station master, and the train conductor
寫作大綱	引導句	Nina was going to Taichung to visit her cousin on a Saturday morning.
	發展句	圖一	Since she had arrived at the train station 20 minutes early, she decided to play some games.
		圖二	Halfway through the journey, Nina fell asleep.
		圖三	As Nina was about to leave the station, she couldn’t find her phone anywhere.
	結論句	After they talked, the station master told Nina that a passenger had just handed the phone to the conductor, and that it would be sent back to Taichung Station on the next train.

 

 範文 

        Nina was going to Taichung to visit her cousin on a Saturday morning. Since she had arrived at the train station 20 minutes early, she decided to play some games to kill time. When the train came and stopped, she boarded and started looking for her seat. Much to her delight, she happened to have gotten a window seat. Halfway through the journey, she  fell asleep.

        When Nina awoke, the train was just pulling into Taichung Station. She hurried to get off the train once it had stopped. When she was about to leave the station, she couldn’t find her phone anywhere. Suddenly, it occurred to her that she had left it on the window sill in the train. When she went to the station master for help, he immediately called the train conductor. After they talked, the station master told Nina that a passenger had just handed the phone to the conductor, and that it would be sent back to Taichung Station on the next train.

 

 

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