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請救救我的帳號! Account Suspended, Help!
寫一封文長至少 120 個單詞( words) 的信
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信函寫作

 

 提示 

假如你( 英文名字假設為 Judy) 是一名英文教學 YouTuber( 頻道名稱假設為 Master English with Judy),經營頻道(channel) 三年已有十萬訂閱數(subscriber),每個禮拜準時上片, 也會留言回覆粉絲問題,但近日卻收到 YouTube 官方通知,指出你的頻道含有違反社群規範( Community Guidelines) 的不實資訊( misinformation),所以將你的帳號停權( suspend), 你不但無法登入帳號, 也失去所有影片和訂閱。
請以此背景為題,寫一封文長至少 120 個單詞( words) 的信給 YouTube Team,第一段告知 頻道無故遭停權, 第二段簡述頻道宗旨, 並請求回復帳號。

 

 寫作格式 

  1. 收信人稱謂(salutation)─ 如 Dear Mr. Johnson,,如果不知道收件人的姓名,可用 Dear 加上 對方的職稱或公司名稱,會比不具名的寫 “Dear Sir / Madam,” 或 “To Whom It May Concern,” 來得更有禮貌且適當,以本信函為例,可以用 Dear YouTube Team,。

  2. 信件主體(body of the letter)─ 通常一般信件採用內縮式,商業書信多用齊頭式。可在進入信件 的主題前加一些問候語(問候近況、詢問健康,表思念對方等)。

  3. 結尾敬語(complimentary close)─ 如 Sincerely,、Best regards, 或 Best wishes, 等。

  4. 簽名(signature)─ 如 Amy Liu(如為紙本信件,應親筆簽名)。

 

 布局 

第一段:來信目的 → 詢問自己頻道被停權的相關問題。
告知原委 → YouTube 告知自己所經營頻道內含不實資訊,且無法再登入帳號。

第二段:頻道介紹 → 提供學習英文的訣竅以激勵人們學英文,也會耐心回覆問題。 自我澄清 → 影片內容皆基於可靠來源。
請求複查 → 希望 YouTube 能再次審查,讓自己能重新取回帳號。

 

 大綱 

第一段: Im writing to inquire about the suspension of my YouTube channel.

a. YouTube told me that my channel contained some sort of misinformation that violates the Community Guidelines.

b. I couldn’t log in to my account and lost all my videos and subscribers.

第二段: I set up my channel to boost peoples motivation to learn English.

a.My videos include tips for improving English skills and people’s learning experiences.

b. I can assure you that my videos are based on reliable sources.

c. I try to help those who want to learn English more efficiently.

結論句: I request that the platform review my channels suspension and allow me to retrieve my account.

 

 範文 

Dear YouTube Team,

        I’m writing to inquire about the suspension of my YouTube channel. I received a notice from YouTube telling me that my channel, Master English with Judy, contained some sort of misinformation that violates the platform’s Community Guidelines. Afterwards, I couldn’t  log in to my account. What’s worse, I have lost access to all my videos and subscribers.

        I set up my channel three years ago to boost people’s motivation to learn English. Since then, I have uploaded videos every week. My videos include tips for improving English skills and people’s different experiences in learning English. I know I’m responsible for delivering correct information to my viewers, so I can assure you that all the content in my videos is based on reliable sources. In addition, I always reply to any questions from my viewers patiently and sincerely. I have simply tried to help those who want to learn English more efficiently without violating any regulations. Therefore, I request that the platform review the situation about my channel’s suspension and allow me to retrieve my account and its content.

 

 

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Words in Use
suspension
[səˋspɛnʃən]
n. . 中止,暫停;(車輛的)懸載系統,減震裝置
violate
[ˋvaɪə͵let]
vt. 違反
guideline
[ˋgaɪd͵laɪn]
n. 行動綱領,指導方針 (常用複數)
access
[ˋæksɛs]
n. (對人、地、物的)接近或使用的權利或門徑(與介詞 to 並用)
vt. 使用;(電腦)存取(資料)
boost
[bust]
vt. 增加,提升
n. 促進,推動
motivation
[͵motəˋveʃən]
n. 動機;幹勁
assure
[əˋʃʊr]
vt. 向(某人)保證
content
[ˋkəntɛnt]
n. (書、演講的)內容(不可數);內容物(恆用複數);目錄(恆用複數)
regulation
[͵rɛgjəˋleʃən]
n. 規定,法規
retrieve
[rɪˋtriv]
vt. . 重新找回
request
[rɪˋkwɛst]
vt. & n. 請求;要求
suspend
[səˋspɛnd]
vt. 中斷,中止;吊銷(執照);垂掛,懸掛
misinformation
[͵mɪsɪnfəˋmeʃən]
n. 不實資訊
subscriber
[səbˋskraɪbɚ]
n. 訂閱者
viewer
[ˋvjuɚ]
n. 觀賞者
inquire
[ɪnˋkwaɪr]
vt. & vi. . 詢問
responsible
[rɪˋspɑnsəb!]
adj. 應負責的;負責可靠的
Practical Phrases
log in / on to...
 登入/登進⋯⋯(電腦系統)

I can't log in to my computer without upgrading the software.
沒有升級軟體我就我的電腦。

set up... / set... up
  建立 / 安排 / 設定好......

We set up a statue in memory of the hero.

我們建立一座雕像記念這位英雄。

be responsible for
 負責……,為……負責

Adults are responsible for their actions.
成年人要為自己的行為負責

be based on / upon sth
 依據某物
= be grounded in / on...

The movie was based on a true story.
這部電影是根據一個真實故事所拍攝的。

reply to sth
 回答 / 覆某事物
= in reply to sth

Have you replied to Alan’s letter yet?
艾倫的信了沒?

sb demand / require / request that S (+ should) + V
 某人要求……
since then
 從那時起

The whole system has changed since then.

從那時起整個系統就改變了。

those who + V
 凡是⋯⋯的人;(那些)⋯⋯的人

Liz shoots videos to share her tips with those who want to lose weight.
麗姿拍攝影片與想減重的人分享她的方法。

Those who fail to upload the final project before the deadline will flunk the class.
凡是沒有在截止期限前交期末報告的人這堂課都會被當。

what’s worse, S+V
 更糟的是,⋯⋯
= to make matters worse, S + V

Terry doesn't want to go on a diet; what's worse, he hardly exercises.
泰瑞不想節食;更糟的是,他幾乎不運動。

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