把文章丟給 AI 潤飾,看起來變專業了?小心你的原意已經被完全扭曲!如果你的英文底子不夠,沒有能力去判斷、修正 AI 的提案,下場就是在職場上被老闆看破手腳,甚至被 AI 賣了都還不知道!
Wesley 老師在節目中舉了兩個讓人冷汗直流的真實案例:
案例一
看圖說故事的引言
語感全變了
老師原句
The pictures show two very different situations when people meet their friends.
這些圖片顯示了人們與朋友見面時,兩種截然不同的狀況。
AI 潤飾後
The illustrations depict contrasting scenarios regarding how individuals approach meeting their friends.
老師解析:一句讀者一目了然的話,被改得像百科全書詞條。pictures 升級成 illustrations,different 換成帶有強烈對比意味的 contrasting,還被硬塞進 regarding how individuals approach 這種完全沒有必要的累贅語。
案例二
教科書草稿的評語
32 words → 62 words
老師原評語(32 字)
The sentence implies that the motivation behind kind acts is winning a big prize, which is a problematic attitude to instill in students. Kindness should not be given as a calculated investment.
這句子暗示做好事的動機是為了贏得大獎,灌輸學生這種態度是有問題的。友善不該被當作算計過的投資。
AI 修改後(膨脹成 62 字)
The sentence implies that the primary motivation behind performing kind acts is winning a material prize, which models a transactional attitude rather than genuine altruism. To instill positive values in students, kindness should not be framed as a calculated investment. Please revise the sentence to focus on the intrinsic value of helping others, or substitute it with a completely different exercise question.