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《常春藤解析英語雜誌》2020年10月【圖片寫作】單元主題為登山景觀區人山人海的照片，以及說明該景觀區人數已達上限的告示牌，與 110 年大學學測英文作文賞花區及寫有請勿踐踏的告示牌，兩者皆為與「出遊、大自然、告示牌」相關。

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請觀察以下圖片，並根據圖片內容想像發生的事件或故事，寫一篇至少 120 個單詞（words）的英文作文。文分兩段，第一段描述第一張圖片中所呈現的場景， 以及正在發生的狀況或事件；第二段則描述第二張圖片中所呈現的場景， 以及敘述該事件（ 或故事） 接下來的發展和結果。 

寫作指導
第一段根據第一張圖片內容描述當時的事件或故事：
要將圖片內容轉化成文字，首先要運用觀察力分析畫面的來龍去脈，看清楚圖片中出現什麼，包括人物、事物、事件、地點、時間等，把握重點細節後，再將觀察到的內容進行具體的描繪（description）。
以本圖片為例，重點有大自然和眾多遊客等。

第二段根據第二張圖片內容敘述該事件（或故事）接下來的發展和結果：
在本段中，要根據兩張圖片所呈現的事件推理出合理的發展，此時要運用想像力，以圖片畫面為開端，想像接下來可能發生的事，寫出包含發展及結果的完整故事。

以本圖片為例，重點有景點訪客人數爆滿及轉移遊玩地點等。  

大綱
第一段： As a nature lover, I often go hiking with my family on the weekend.
a. We went to a famous mountain trail, hoping to get some great photos from the top.
b. We set out early to avoid heavy traffic and arrived at the spot after a two-hour drive.
c. We found that the mountain was very crowded.

第二段： Just as we were discussing what to do, we saw a sign that said “Over 1,000 visitors! Please visit other attractions.”
a. So we decided not to go to the trail and found a flat place for a picnic instead.
b. We picked a nice spot on the lawn, took out the picnic mat, and had fun chatting while eating the food we had prepared for the hike.
結論句： Even though we didn’t make it to the peak, we still felt relaxed after the pleasant time we spent together.  

範文
       As a nature lover, I often go hiking with my family on the weekend. Yesterday, we went to a famous mountain trail. We prepared water, snacks, and even some photography equipment so that we could capture the breathtaking views from the mountaintop. We set out early to avoid being stuck in heavy traffic. After a two-hour drive, we finally arrived at our destination, only to find that the mountain was already packed with people. In front of us were literally hundreds of people!      Just as we were discussing what to do, we saw a sign that said “Over 1,000 visitors! Please visit other attractions.” We then decided not to climb up the mountain, but to find a flat place for a picnic. We chose a nice spot on the lawn♦ and took out our picnic mat. We ate the food we had prepared earlier and had a good chat. Even though we didn’t make it to the peak, we still felt relaxed after the pleasant time we spent together.

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