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白目自拍客 A Frightening
寫出一篇涵蓋每張圖片內容且結局完整的故事, 文長至少 120 個單詞( words)
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請仔細觀察以下三幅連環圖片的內容, 並想像第四幅圖片可能的發展, 然後寫出一篇涵蓋每張圖片內容且結局完整的故事,文長至少 120 個單詞( words )。

寫作小棧

  1. 看圖作文在於描述圖片的內容,也就是圖中人物(包括臉部表情、情緒、穿著、人物互動等)、時間、地點和事件等資訊的細節串連起來描寫或敘述,一般會以下列兩種方式來呈現:

    * 描述文( description )→ 根據圖中主角姓名,以第三人稱的觀點來描述或解讀圖片的內容。

    * 敘述文( narration )→ 筆者本身融入圖中其中一個角色,用第一人稱的觀點來敘述故事情節。

  2. 不管採取描述文或敘述文,都記得運用想像力和邏輯思考先構思出一個合理的劇情,亦即重點分明,有開頭、發展、結尾,以求故事情節前後連貫。

  3. 善用轉折語來串連每張圖之間的關係或發展,方能寫出流暢的看圖說故事,而非天馬行空的跳躍式描述或敘述。再者,隨著故事發展,可適度對圖中人物的情緒變化多加著墨,讓文章內容更豐富且更具可讀性。

 

構思方向

檢視圖片後,以描述文來解讀圖片內容,構思出以下劇情:

Ian 與 James 相約去爬山,兩人在登山步道的起點會合 → Ian 看到懸崖就跨過圍欄跑去自拍,全然無視警告標誌, James 想開口制止卻已來不及 → 幸好 Ian 跌進懸崖下方的湖泊,保住了小命,但他受了傷無法行走,所以 James 只好打電話求救。

故事結局是,救難隊找到了 Ian 跟 James ,而 Ian 也因為自己的白目行為而遭到斥責。他學到教訓,再也不敢魯莽行事。

 

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故事設定 主題 A frightening hike
時地 On a long weekend, Ivy Park, a cliff, and a lake
人物 Ian and James
寫作大綱 引導句 Ian and James arranged to go hiking at Ivy Park on a long weekend.
發展句 圖一 They met up at the start of the main trail.
圖二 Despite the warning sign and the fence, Ian rushed to the edge of
the cliff to take a selfie. He didn’t realize he was backing up too far
and therefore fell off the cliff. James was horrified.
圖三 Luckily, Ian landed in a lake and survived. But he was wounded, so
James had no choice but to call for help.
結論句 That day, he learned that recklessness can get you into trouble.

 

範文

Ian and James arranged to go hiking at Ivy Park on a long weekend. They decided to meet up at the start of the main trail. The friends started up the mountain path and arrived at a scenic spot, where there was a cliff   overlooking a beautiful lake. Ignoring the warning sign, Ian jumped over the fence, ran towards the edge of the cliff, and took out his smartphone to take a selfie. Just as James was about to warn Ian to be careful, his friend backed up too far and fell off the cliff!

James was in a panic , thinking Ian had fallen to his death. He ran quickly down the trail. To his great relief , James saw Ian swimming slowly in the lake. Fortunately, the cliff was not high and Ian had landed in the clear, blue water. Ian was mildly injured and unable to walk, so James decided to call for help. When the rescue team found them, Ian was scolded for not heeding the warning. That day, he learned that recklessness can get you into trouble.

 

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伊恩和詹姆斯約好在連假時到常春藤公園健行。他們決定在主步道的起點會合。這對哥倆好沿著登山步道出發,來到了一處景色優美的地點,那裡有個懸崖,俯瞰著一座美麗的湖泊。伊恩無視警告標誌,跳過圍欄、跑向懸崖邊,然後拿出智慧型手機自拍。就在詹姆斯要警告伊恩小心的時候,他的朋友退得太遠,跌下了懸崖!

詹姆斯驚慌失措,以為伊恩摔死了。他飛快跑下步道。看到伊恩在湖裡慢慢地游著,詹姆斯感到如釋重負。幸好懸崖不高,而伊恩跌進了清澈碧藍的水中。伊恩受了輕傷,無法行走,所以詹姆斯決定打電話求助。當救難隊找到他們時,伊恩因為沒有理會警告而被斥責。那天他學到了魯莽行事可能會惹禍上身。

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